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- The following is an archived discussion of Red złoty's DYK nomination. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page; such as this archived nomination"s (talk) page, the nominated article's (talk) page, or the Did you know (talk) page. Unless there is consensus to re-open the archived discussion here. No further edits should be made to this page. See the talk page guidelines for (more) information.
The result was: promoted by Ashwin147 (talk) 15:11, 4 April 2013 (UTC).
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Red złoty
... that red złoty (pictured) were the gold coins minted in Poland from the 1320s to 1831?
- Reviewed: Penn Symons
Created by Piotrus (talk). Self nominated at 07:11, 14 March 2013 (UTC).
- I'm making some copy edits and left you a question in the edit summaries. I think you should removed the dates from the book templates and leave only the year, and reference 5's title needs tweaking--I think the name of the publication is part of the title. Drmies (talk) 18:50, 14 March 2013 (UTC)
- Fixed minor items, replied on talk. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 04:50, 15 March 2013 (UTC)
- OK, but now the burden is the "1320s" in the hook: I don't see that the article says that those coins (before 1526, I suppose) were called red zloty. If I read this correctly it seems that they were introduced as part of a monetary reform begun in the 1320s--is that correct? If so, the article should identify our coin more clearly in its early stages. Drmies (talk) 14:36, 15 March 2013 (UTC)
- The source does call these coins red zloty: Dukat Łokietka, przedstawiony tu w rysunku, jest zatem pierwszym "czerwonym złotym" polskim. - "The Ducat of Lokietek (Wladyslaw), shown in the illustration, is then the first Polish "red zloty"". I guess it's in quotation marks though. I do think a more involved hook would be good.Volunteer Marek 18:18, 17 March 2013 (UTC)
- Full review needed. BlueMoonset (talk) 05:36, 26 March 2013 (UTC)
- I just don't think the proposed hook is very sexy. Mightn't Template:Tq be better calculated to catch the reader's interest, with flammable words like "insurgent" and "uprising"? Bishonen | talk 23:49, 2 April 2013 (UTC).
- I like it :) --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 04:03, 3 April 2013 (UTC)
- ALT1 ... that the last Polish red złoty (pictured) were the so-called "insurgent ducats" minted at the Warsaw mint in 1831, on the eve of the November Uprising?
- :REVIEW COMPLETED - The following has been checked in this review by Esemono
- QPQ done:Penn Symons
- Article created by Piotrus on March 14, 2013 and has 2305 characters of readable prose
- NPOV
- 1831 coin image is in the PD
- ALT1 Hook is interesting and taken AGF from the offline Refs 2: Zygmunt Gloger, Encyklopedia staropolska
- Every paragraph sourced, looks like reliable sources
- Earwig @ Toolserver Copyvio Detector found no copyvio
- GTG -- Esemono (talk) 04:27, 3 April 2013 (UTC)
- Note: no need to have two versions of the same hook, ALT1 and ALT2, one with "(pictured)" and one without: the promoter will remove "pictured" if it isn't. I've deleted the otherwise identical ALT2, and struck the original hook, which was not approved by reviewer. BlueMoonset (talk) 22:56, 3 April 2013 (UTC)