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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by HalfGig talk 03:37, 15 February 2017 (UTC)

Léocadia

Converted from a redirect by Gerda Arendt (talk) and LouisAlain (talk). Nominated by Gerda Arendt (talk) at 23:16, 8 February 2017 (UTC).

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Thank you for the review. The "lead" and plot are translated from the French article, - thanks for the recommendation to get better than the original. Will think about it but not right now. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:17, 10 February 2017 (UTC)
Template:Reply I reworked the lead a bit to show you what I mean. It should only take a few minutes to sort out the plot section. ···日本穣 · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe · Join WP Japan! 18:26, 10 February 2017 (UTC)
Thank you! - I am German and know little French, LouisAlain is French, - how about you make it English and we include you among the contributors? - I was annoyed by a red link in Poulenc's works, and am busy filling the next. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 18:57, 10 February 2017 (UTC)
Template:Reply Well, I'm reviewing it so I can't very well be a contributor. Face-wink.svg However, I've reworded the plot summary for you, split it into paragraphs, and reworded one other sentence later in the article. Can you think of any other possible hooks? Perhaps something like this?
ALT1 ... that veteran actors Helen Hayes and Richard Burton played the main roles in Time Remembered, the 1957 English translation of Jean Anouilh's play Léocadia?
···日本穣 · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe · Join WP Japan! 19:31, 10 February 2017 (UTC)
Thank you ;) - The ALT makes me sigh, though, "veteran" not in the article, + I always want the subject an early link. If you think that actors of an older generation are not attractive, stop before they come in.
ALT2: ... that Jean Anouilh's play Léocadia, one of his pièces roses, was staged on Broadway as Time Remembered? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 19:46, 10 February 2017 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg I like ALT2. I think we're good to go. ···日本穣 · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe · Join WP Japan! 20:07, 10 February 2017 (UTC)