Template:Did you know nominations/In the Sun (painting)

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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by  — Crisco 1492 (talk) 13:15, 1 February 2013 (UTC)

In the Sun (painting)

Created by Leningradartist (talk). Nominated by Rcej (talk) at 06:54, 5 January 2013 (UTC)

  • Symbol question.svg Partial Review: For dyk, all paragraphs need to be cited, and there should be one at the end of each paragraph for the immediately prior sentences. Also, the article needs to have a copyedit for grammar, for example "In 1994 and 1996 the portrait..." and the entire first paragraph of #History. Chris857 (talk) 05:09, 9 January 2013 (UTC)
  •  Done Fixed. Rcej (Robert)talk 08:45, 9 January 2013 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote4.png Review needs to be completed. BlueMoonset (talk) 02:36, 13 January 2013 (UTC)
Symbol question.svg As nothing happened here, I start from scratch. Article is long enough, new enough, I hope the pic is licensed enough, good sources, Russian accepted AGF. Can we have a bit more on the painting? The article is mostly on the people. In the hook, I would say "his wife" instead of "his own wife", I don't like ownership here ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:07, 28 January 2013 (UTC)
  • Axed 'own'. Rcej (Robert)talk 12:15, 31 January 2013 (UTC)
Pictogram voting keep.svg - if you can say more on the pic you are welcome, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:26, 31 January 2013 (UTC)