Template:Did you know nominations/History of Islam in the Arctic and Subarctic regions

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 12:29, 26 August 2020 (UTC)

Islam in the Arctic

Midnight Sun Mosque in Inuvik
Midnight Sun Mosque in Inuvik
  • Comment: First DYK, feel free to show me what I've done wrong or help out :-)

Created by YourUsernameWillBePublic (talk). Self-nominated at 01:18, 30 July 2020 (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg YourUsernameWillBePublic, this is very interesting. Pity you didn't have this ready a week or two ago so we could have had it on the front page in time for the start of the hajj. Anyway, the article needs a good scrubbing. The opening sentence already has some issues, and I see problems with the references also--repeated references need to be consolidated, some are just bare URLs while others are fully cited, etc. So that's the first thing that needs to be taken care of. Template:U, you helped move this--can you help get it ready for the front page? Drmies (talk) 01:25, 30 July 2020 (UTC)
  • Template:U, I will look at some of the technical aspects, but the topic is entirely foreign to me. I was simply the reviewer at WP:AFC who accepted the draft. Fiddle Faddle 07:55, 30 July 2020 (UTC)
  • Template:U,  Done All disambig links I could find now point to correct targets. One for Template:U to check is Alta.
All redlinks I could target to articles are targeted. There are three left. I am not sure on DYK's needs, but two seem sensible to leave in order to seek to spawn new articles. The third is debatable.
All references filled and consolidated using reFill. One had to be done manually Fiddle Faddle 08:39, 30 July 2020 (UTC)
  • I think the "Alta" points to the correct place (I assume someone fixed it and I did not have it pointing there?), I am not sure what the ReFill consolidation/ manual talk means, and looking on Google it seems like the "Muslim Welfare Centre" is in Toronto East on McLevin Street and the Toronto Dawah Centre is in Toronto West on Bloor Street...so I would assume they are not related to each other, but I do not know for certain. FYI, Eid starts tonight. YourUsernameWillBePublic (talk) 12:59, 30 July 2020 (UTC)
  • Template:U, Thank you for correcting the Nenets issue. I did my best to remove all disambiguation links. I have tried hard to find targets for all redlinks, too. I am not sure if reFill is a gadget (preferences pane) or not, I have it in my tools segment of my left hand margin and use it to fill in and consolidate citations and references. I implemented it years ago and have forgotten how. Fiddle Faddle 13:17, 30 July 2020 (UTC)
  • User:Timtrent, I pinged you because you and I are old hands at this, and Template:U is not. I appreciate all your help. This article, and again I'll say it's very interesting, needs some more work to get on the front page. I did some copy edits and cleaned up some citations, but there's plenty more. Template:U, look at notes 2 and 5, for instance--they are incomplete (as are 16 through 20, and probably more). Also, I think there should be a bit of historical background in the Russia section (see my edit summary on that Tatarstan paragraph), just a bit, also with a bit more on the CDUMES, since it matters who controls what. So let's see what we can do. Drmies (talk) 16:30, 30 July 2020 (UTC)
  • Template:U, I'm tempted to suggest we might look for several more ALT hooks. Meanwhile I'm trying to get reFILL to do some more work. Arcane stuff I enjoy. I must be odd. Fiddle Faddle 16:39, 30 July 2020 (UTC)
  • Further hooks for consideration prior to forming into formal ALT hooks:
  • The first mass immigration of Muslims into the Northwest Territories were following the 1970s boom in Arctic petroleum exploration.
  • The Islamic Community Center of Anchorage Alaska was the first purpose-built mosque in the US state
  • At the outset of the 20th century, Finland was the only country in Northern Europe to have a native Muslim population
  • Norway's largest Arctic mosque is in Tromso, built in 2006
These are four that I can find that may be worth pursuing. I have not formed them into full hooks. They have varying merits Fiddle Faddle 16:52, 30 July 2020 (UTC)
  • Template:Ping I've tried very hard to look at all the references and filled them out to the best of my now cross eyed ability. I have done all of them (probably). Please check that my work looks useful. One, plus its text, I have removed and migrated to the talk page in case it becomes useful later Fiddle Faddle 18:59, 30 July 2020 (UTC)
  • Template:Ping I've just been through the references again and fleshed out those with less complete parameters. Author names had slipped in a couple of cases, and one incorrect cite template had been used. Who knew there was a {{cite conference}}? Very useful! Fiddle Faddle 07:34, 31 July 2020 (UTC)
  • Sorry, a few of the changes, like Nenets to Yamal, are really confusing to me and seem incorrect (though I appreciate the help, the references look much better now especially) - but like this edit that says ARE is United Arab Emirates, ARE is Arab Republic of Egypt, UAE is United Arab Emirates - I believe I had correct the first time but now it is incorrect. Similarly the paragraph about Irkutsky was removed entirely, even though you'll notice it is indeed Far North (Russia) (and listed in that article as such). The title of the article really should just be "Islam in the Arctic" and only got to its current state because of an erroneous belief that "Arctic=Arctic Circle" but the Arctic Circle is a more restrictive area - whereas everything in the article is considered "Arctic" by either Western or Russian definitions of the term. I have no idea why it has "History of" as the title, Islam in Canada, Islam in Russia, Islam in Norway, etc do not have "History of". I would certainly recommend moving it to a shorter title. YourUsernameWillBePublic (talk) 22:51, 30 July 2020 (UTC)
  • Template:U, no-one expects you to stand back. If things are incorrect please correct them. Fiddle Faddle 22:56, 30 July 2020 (UTC)
  • YourUsernameWillBePublic, I'm not sure what you mean with "paragraph about Irkutsky". Irkutsk was mentioned, but that was incorrect: the 1914 mosque was planned to be built in Yakutsk, according to the source. I changed UAE back to Egypt; please see my edit summary. As for the title, I believe you are correct: Template:U, I think we should move it back--thanks. Drmies (talk) 23:20, 30 July 2020 (UTC)
You're right, wow, I can't believe I confused Irkutsk and Yakustk in the ten seconds between reading the article and then typing the sentence...that's embarrassing for me :) Nevertheless my point stands, since Yakustk is also Arctic/FarNorth by Russian definition - so the detail on the pre-war mosque should still be included rather than removed. YourUsernameWillBePublic (talk) 02:08, 31 July 2020 (UTC)
No worries, but the pre-war mosque wasn't removed. Drmies (talk) 13:36, 31 July 2020 (UTC)

Is there anything else I need to do that I am able to do, or is this ready to go? YourUsernameWillBePublic (talk) 17:24, 2 August 2020 (UTC)

  • YourUsernameWillBePublic, please look at the Russian table with percentages--the reference doesn't work (see edit summary in history). I like the first hook, and I am not sure about ALT1--the ZTF, according to the text, built two mosques; the third one is, I suppose, the warehouse in Whitehorse, but the text does not say it was done by ZTF. Plz check if you want to run with ALT1. Thank you, Drmies (talk) 21:42, 5 August 2020 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Full review needed by new reviewer. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 01:28, 12 August 2020 (UTC)

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I am confused by pretty much everything you said, but clicking that "CopyVio Detector" I see it indicates that this page is a copyvio of a garbage dump page that just copied the Wiki article, not vice versa. (it also copies verbatim from Islam in Iceland and elsewhere ending up with garbled nonsensical sentences). I don't object to removing the name of the Greenlander. No idea what you mean by hooks, images and alts so I think I am done with Wikipedia I have done everything I can do and spent ages trying to finetune this to make it "good enough" to compete against far less sourced, less neutral and less free articles that appear in the DYK. Just feels like a failure. — Preceding unsigned comment added by YourUsernameWillBePublic (talkcontribs)
This nomination is not a failure. It is a work in progress with a lot of potential. I am sorry to hear you are frustrated. I find that reviewing the information at Wikipedia:Did you know often helps newer contributors. I am happy to answer any specific questions. I hope you do want to continue. Flibirigit (talk) 16:58, 13 August 2020 (UTC)
Template:U, Am I correct in understanding that citing the hook itself instead of saying that it has references within the article will allow this nomination to move forward (assuming the cite to be acceptable)? Please ping me in any reply Fiddle Faddle 18:34, 20 August 2020 (UTC)
Template:U,If I'm correct, I have references for the three:
All by the Zubaidah Tallab Foundation
What else is required, please? Fiddle Faddle 18:55, 20 August 2020 (UTC)
Template:U, let's start by putting the copyvio thing to rest: it's a ruse. I wrote that sentence, and it's a summary from the article by Laruelle and Hohmann. Surely you agree that this is some kind of dump. Template:U, Template:U, let's see if we can't figure out a new hook. Drmies (talk) 20:02, 20 August 2020 (UTC)
Template:U, I have referenced the existing hook? Also suggested some possibles way ^^^^^ up there Fiddle Faddle 20:05, 20 August 2020 (UTC)
I know, Template:U, but the nominator suggested something else. Oh, I see your suggestions now--sorry I neglected to look up. This nomination is getting a bit long and I hope we can get it on the way. I have one:
  • ALT2 ...that in Canada a movement of Muslims toward the Arctic started in the early 1900s, and that Muslims in remote northern regions tend toward pluralism, disregarding Sunni vs. Shia differences? Drmies (talk) 20:09, 20 August 2020 (UTC)
Template:Ping If we have a hook already that is liked, and we have three refrences for it (bulleted just above) then, while I like your ALT2 well enough, why not go with the one that can be referenced easily (I did the heavy lifting on that, and it was heavy) and get this moved forward? I am not sure that the original nom is playing any more. I can be of no use from tonorrow on for a week. I'm away. I'm pretty much done for the day here, too. Fiddle Faddle 20:20, 20 August 2020 (UTC)
OK, Template:U--let's leave that for the reviewer then--Template:U, the initial hook, is it well-sourced enough now? Drmies (talk) 20:22, 20 August 2020 (UTC)
I am aware of the comments above. I will finish the review later today or tomorrow. Cheers. Flibirigit (talk) 17:48, 21 August 2020 (UTC)
Template:U The photos used in this article are beautiful and I am so impressed that we got them on Wikipedia. May I recommend using the caption for the first image as a hook? It should also be noted that the quote of Amier Suliman is unsourced and just mentioned in the caption. That should probably be mentioned in the body as well. Anyways, here's a hook... HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 02:05, 22 August 2020 (UTC)
  • ALT3: ...that despite an extensive history of Islam in the Arctic, the first mosque (pictured) in the Canadian Arctic was built in 2010? [1]

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  • If the general consensus is that this site has copied from Wikipedia, I feel that is sufficient discussion to alleviate the concerns here at Earwig. Template:Ping, please do ensure each of those three sources you found are put into the article with the corresponding mentions of the charity. Also, if you want to reorganise ALT1 slightly to focus more on Islam than the charity, please do. Template:Ping, ALT2 seems interesting, but it seemed to say that only the Canadian Arctic muslims practiced pluralism, as opposed to all Arctic muslims. Also, if you can make use of the photo of the Midnight Sun Mosque in the hook, please do. ALT3 seems like a simple and catchy hook. It would be best if mentioned in the corresponding section for the Canadian Arctic. Template:Ping, do you mind adding it into the body? Overall this nomination looks promising. I had added DYK credits for both Timtrent and Drmies for their ample contributions. Flibirigit (talk) 04:58, 22 August 2020 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg ALT3 is approved. It is verified with the source, mentioned inline and properly cited. The corresponding photo is properly licensed, clear at a low resolution and greatly enhances the hook. Article adheres to all other DYK criteria. I am willing to revisit the review if updates are made to suppport the other hooks proposed. Cheers. Flibirigit (talk) 18:28, 23 August 2020 (UTC)