Template:Did you know nominations/Association for Molecular Pathology v. Myriad Genetics

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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: rejected by  — Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:29, 15 November 2012 (UTC)
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Association for Molecular Pathology v. Myriad Genetics

Created/expanded by Yushan717 (talk). Nominated by Y.ishihara (talk) at 20:26, 22 October 2012 (UTC)

Suggest italicizing case name and not wikilinking court name, and rephrasing like so:

  • Symbol delete vote.svg Article has undergone commendable improvements recently, but has not increased 5x in size.
  • 5095 characters of readable prose on September 15
  • 14612 characters now, less than 3x the size a month and a half ago.
  • I would add that although the new details are good, the lede has become more opaque since Yushan's original edit; it would be good to make the effects of the decision more prominent in the first paragraph. Peace, groupuscule (talk) 22:39, 14 November 2012 (UTC)