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Anton Colella

Created by Arbitrarily0 (talk). Self-nominated at 16:15, 28 November 2020 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. Please check the reorganization that I did on the article. The lead is rather cluttered and does not need any of those uncontroversial cites. The hook is okay, but I'm wondering if it would attract more attention to speak of him becoming the CEO of several organizations, including the Institute of Chartered Accountants of Scotland, without having an MBA? QPQ done. Yoninah (talk) 00:26, 13 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Template:Ping I think your reorganization is good; thanks for that. I did some simplification of the intro paragraph -- what do you think? I'm very open to a hook about his lack of an MBA, but I feel like businessmen who lack MBAs aren't very rare; am I wrong? Arbitrarily0 (talk) 18:25, 13 December 2020 (UTC)