Template:Did you know nominations/Angelo De Donatis

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 23:29, 29 July 2017 (UTC)

Angelo De Donatis

Created by Ergo Sum (talk). Self-nominated at 02:27, 2 June 2017 (UTC).

  • Having worked on this entry and suggested language along these lines I support the version now proposed. It's a complex point to make succinctly, so I hope others will offer rewrites. The title Vicar General means little to the average reader. My own suggestion, though I don't like saying "pope" twice, is:
  • ALT2: ...that since the sixteenth century no one under the rank of cardinal has managed the Diocese of Rome on behalf of the pope until Pope Francis gave Angelo De Donatis that assignment this year? Bmclaughlin9 (talk) 20:26, 4 June 2017 (UTC)
  • Since Template:U has made significant edits to the article, I have added him to the DYK creation credits. Yoninah (talk) 19:04, 3 July 2017 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg It seems, based on that, that the hook is supported. Template:Ping Would you like to promote the hook according to the instructions, since self-promotion is deprecated? Ergo Sum 18:25, 29 June 2017 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Template:Ping Per WP:DYKSG#H2 you are not allowed to approve your own article, and Template:U is not allowed to approve his own hook. And a hook reviewer cannot promote what s/he reviews. Calling on new reviewer to complete this review, after which a different prep builder will promote it. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 18:59, 3 July 2017 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the information. Wasn't aware of that. Ergo Sum 19:38, 3 July 2017 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg The ALT2 hook is acceptable, as is the original hook, but I have struck ALT1 as being less interesting to a general audience. The article was new enough when nominated and is long enough. The article is neutral and I detected no copyright issues. This is good to go and a promoter will move it to a prep set shortly. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:26, 28 July 2017 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg Hi, I came by to promote this. I added cites to 2 paragraphs – please check that I did that correctly. Also, there is a "citation needed" tag in the last paragraph under "Episcopal ministry". Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 20:05, 29 July 2017 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg Template:Ping It looks like you've added those citations correctly. I've also removed the various references to Ostia, since they were uncited and I could not find any citations for them. Barring any other issues, the article should be good to go. Ergo Sum 23:17, 29 July 2017 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg Thank you. Restoring tick per Cwmhiraeth's review. Yoninah (talk) 23:26, 29 July 2017 (UTC)