Template:Did you know nominations/Adelphi School

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:20, 30 June 2017 (UTC)

Adelphi School

Adelphi School
Adelphi School
  • ... that the schoolhouse of the Adelphi School (pictured) is considered to be the last free school building still standing in Philadelphia? Source: "The school is also probably the last surviving example of a free school building in Philadelphia." (from the NRHP nomination form)

5x expanded by Difference engine (talk). Self-nominated at 02:40, 7 June 2017 (UTC).

  • Comment only I think you can trim "the schoolhouse of" from the hook. Also, the article should explain what a "free school" is. Edwardx (talk) 00:47, 8 June 2017 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg - I'll review this for you Template:U because I think this is an interesting subject. I share Edward's opinion that "free school", which some readers may confuse with freedom schools, needs to be explained. If you want "schoolhouse" in the hook, you can rewrite it as Adelphi schoolhouse instead. As for the other points of the review, the article is sourced reliably by books and journals, stays neutral with no obvious copyright violations, and was expanded recently. QPQ is pending.TheGracefulSlick (talk) 07:47, 8 June 2017 (UTC)
Yes, I think you're both right about the concept of a "free school". I wish I could just wikilink to a suitable article but the closest one is free education, which conflates taxpayer-funded and charity-funded schools. I'll see what I can do. --diff (talk) 01:26, 11 June 2017 (UTC)
Template:Reply to Okay, I've edited the article and the hook, lemme know what you think. QPQ also done. --diff (talk) 02:43, 11 June 2017 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg Template:U thank you for taking into account the suggestions brought here. The hook, as well as the article, has clarified the definition of "free school" and the QPQ is now completed. Good to go.TheGracefulSlick (talk) 05:07, 11 June 2017 (UTC)