Template:Did you know nominations/Acha Septriasa, Irwansyah, Love Story (2011 film)

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 10:33, 27 October 2011 (UTC)

Acha Septriasa, Irwansyah, Love Story (2011 film)

  • Comment: Acha Septriasa and Irwansyah are expanded, Love Story is new.
  • I hope to add two more articles if my connection doesn't fritz out again today. Crisco 1492 (talk) 04:58, 16 October 2011 (UTC)

Created/expanded by Crisco 1492 (talk). Self nom at 16:27, 15 October 2011 (UTC)

  • need some time to review...
Article review
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Lionratz (talk) (Although I think the last three are a little short) Lionratz (talk) Lionratz (talk) Lionratz (talk) Lionratz (talk) Lionratz (talk) Lionratz (talk)


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I think the hook "... that former couple Acha Septriasa and Irwansyah were reunited for the film Love Story, which was directed by Hanny Saputra and supervised by Irwansyah's future wife?" would be better. AGF on foreign language sources.--Lionratz (talk) 12:39, 17 October 2011 (UTC)

  • Sungkar was basically onset to ensure she did not get jealous; the one scene the sources emphasize that she was keeping an eye on the two is when Septriasa and Irwansyah kissed. Sungkar was not part of the production crew. Crisco 1492 (talk) 13:44, 17 October 2011 (UTC)
  • Regarding article lengths, Septriasa and the movie are clearly over the minimum. Saputra is at 1800, so not too bad. I felt pretty bad about Sungkar's article peaking out at 1562, but I was driven partially insane by the plethora of sources for trivia about her wedding (how many invitations, what their parents said, etc.) so I wanted to get it over with really quickly. For the hook, how about ALT2 ... that former couple Acha Septriasa and Irwansyah were reunited for Love Story, under the direction of Hanny Saputra, and kissed under the close supervision of Irwansyah's future wife? Crisco 1492 (talk) 12:51, 18 October 2011 (UTC)
  • Pictogram voting keep.svg, AGF on foreign language sources. The new hook sounds okay.--Lionratz (talk) 05:15, 20 October 2011 (UTC)