Template:Did you know nominations/2008 Karnataka-Tamil Nadu hooch tragedy

From blackwiki
Jump to navigation Jump to search
The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Gatoclass (talk) 09:43, 22 November 2013 (UTC)

2008 Karnataka-Tamil Nadu hooch tragedy

Created by Gfosankar (talk). Self nominated at 13:47, 21 October 2013 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Article is new enough and long enough. However, the hook fact is not supported by the source. The source lists the death tolls from a number of hooch tragedies, and it is clear that this killed more people than any of the others on the list, but the source doesn't ever say that this one was considered the worst in this century. Also, the article needs some copy-editing, and it should give some indication of what it was about the liquor that killed people (this source suggests that it was made with industrial ethanol that was denatured by the addition of poisonous methanol). This will be a good candidate for DYK after some more work on the article, plus a revised hook. --Orlady (talk) 15:55, 21 October 2013 (UTC)
  • I just did some minor cleanup of the article, mostly fixing grammar and some spelling. Also, would like to propose the following alternative as a bit more interesting:
Mûĸĸâĸûĸâĸû (blah?) 03:16, 19 November 2013 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg Length/date/QPQ/NPOV/article sourcing is good. Both alt hooks are cited although I agree that ALT2 is more interesting. Should be good to go. Thingg 05:02, 22 November 2013 (UTC)