Template:Did you know nominations/6th Airborne Division in Palestine

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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 13:50, 21 October 2011 (UTC)

6th Airborne Division in Palestine

Created/expanded by Jim Sweeney (talk). Self nom at 20:50, 11 October 2011 (UTC)

Reviewed Template:Did you know nominations/Angel Orensanz Center
  • Pictogram voting keep.svg Date is good. It is long enough. Nice and neutral. Well sourced with inline citations, only thing I wondered about is whether or not the Second World War which is mentioned in the section titled "Jewish resistance movements" should be the First World War? I mean, it is sort of hard to form an organization in 1921 with left-over arms from a 1939-1945 conflict. No copyright violations that I could find in the online sources, and I view the nominator as completely trustworthy. Hook is short enough with 168 characters, absolutely interesting, cited to book and is nice and neutral. Good to go. Manxruler (talk) 23:31, 15 October 2011 (UTC)
Thanks for pointing that out I have reworded it.Jim Sweeney (talk) 07:41, 16 October 2011 (UTC)