Template:Did you know nominations/2-acylglycerophosphocholine

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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 18:10, 7 February 2012 (UTC)

2-acylglycerophosphocholine

General chemical structure of 1-lyso-phosphatidylcholines, where R is a variable fatty acid chain

Created/expanded by İnfoCan (talk). Self nom at 17:25, 23 January 2012 (UTC)

  • Symbol question.svgHook is present in article, cited and the google books page confirms citation. Article is new, big, cited and neutral enough. However I have two concerns, the hook is a bit too technical for our average front page reader, and second the reference should not just be a link to a google book page but include the bibliographic detail on the book, which is titled Phospholipids January 1982 Elsevier by John Nigel Hawthorne, Gordon Brian Ansell. If you need help with a cite book template I am willing to assist. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 03:19, 5 February 2012 (UTC)
  • Thanks, I fixed the ref. Would the following hook be more interesting perhaps? --İnfoCan (talk) 01:40, 6 February 2012 (UTC)
ALT2:
... that in humans, 1-lysolecithin can be be hydrolyzed by ten different enzymes?""
  • ALT2 sounds non technical enough, but I do not see it in the article, So please add in a statment and reference it. It is too much to expect that some one counts up a list to confirm. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 02:15, 6 February 2012 (UTC)
  • Done. Note that the first ref lists 9 of the gene names, the second ref has the tenth name. --İnfoCan (talk) 14:58, 6 February 2012 (UTC)
  • Pictogram voting keep.svg ALT2 hook is in there and cited, in that case good to go, The first of those two ref links won't open for me though. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 21:09, 6 February 2012 (UTC)