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Ur-Quan
- ... that Star Control II's antagonist the Ur-Quan have been compared to the Reapers of Mass Effect, after BioWare creatives cited the Star Control as an inspiration?
Improved to Good Article status by Shooterwalker (talk). Self-nominated at 19:59, 25 November 2020 (UTC).
Article is long enough (9789 characters), is a GA, nominated in time (became GA on 24 November, nominated on 25 November), and article is within policy
WP:DYKHOOK says that "If the subject is a work of fiction or a fictional character, the hook must involve the real world in some way." This hooks is completely in-universe about Star Control and Mass Effect game universes, and the casual reader would have no idea what this hook is about. Please can you provide a hook that adheres to the above rule?
QPQ exempt as the user has 1 previous DYK nomination
Overall the article is good, but the hook needs to be changed. Joseph2302 (talk) 17:58, 14 December 2020 (UTC)
- Working on this a bit. I'm trying to fix the in-universe nature of it. Does it help to rewrite it like this?
- ALT1: ... that BioWare credited the game Star Control as an influence on Mass Effect, leading to design similarities between Star Control II's antagonist the Ur-Quan and the Reapers of Mass Effect ?
- Shooterwalker (talk) 20:09, 19 December 2020 (UTC)