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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 15:23, 27 January 2016 (UTC)

Principality of Erfurt

5x expanded by OwenBlacker (talk). Self-nominated at 00:43, 11 January 2016 (UTC).

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Thank you Jolly Janner (also, say hi to Plymouth for me; I grew up in Ivybridge :o) ). I was meaning to fix the {{cn}} I forgot that I'd left about the destruction of the Cyriaksburg Fortress this evening, so I shall find a suitable reference for that first background paragraph as well.
The destruction of the Napoleonsäule is referenced in citation 8 ("Denkmale Erfurts 1806–1814" [Monuments of Erfurt 1806–1814] (in German). Thüringer Naturbrief. Retrieved 3 January 2016., which has an image of Beck's painting of the column all aflame). The relevant passage reads Template:Talkquote, which Google translates to Template:Talkquote
I've also added an inline citation pointing to reference 5 ("1806–1814: Erfurt unter französischer Besetzung" [1806–1814: Erfurt under French occupation] (in German). Erfurt Stadtverwaltung [Erfurt city administration]. Retrieved 2 January 2016.) where it reads Template:Tq, which Google translates to Template:Tq. Both machine translations are clearly imperfect, but both should give you enough detail not to need to assume my good faith, I would hope? :o) I've also added clearer citations to both of those pages for the detail of the Napoleonshöhe as well, fwiw.
Does that resolve your concerns with ALT2 ? Do you still need me to sort out a reference for the first paragraph of the background section or can that be taken in good faith for the DYKnom? (Like I say, I should be able to look at that this evening, I would hope.) — OwenBlacker (Talk) 07:56, 13 January 2016 (UTC)
Symbol voting keep.svg Thank you for the translations, although all that was needed was an inline citation for the sentence. I can now see you have done so for the column's construction (and destruction). Based on the overall exceptionally high quality of referencing, and the fact that the background paragraph isn't very disputable, I will pass the overall referencing quality on the article. I would advise a closing editor to use ALT2 for Wikipedia's 15th Birthday and trim away the second phrase about its destruction. PS I've actually never lived in Plymouth. I spent the first 18 years of my life growing up in Ivybridge, however. I've now moved far away and cannot say hello for you :( Jolly Ω Janner 23:17, 13 January 2016 (UTC)
Template:Ping Hah, what a small world :o)
Out of interest, what's your concern about the destruction? I thought the reference for that was ok (and that's what I thought made the hook more interesting). If you don'think it's adequately referenced, I'd like to improve that... — OwenBlacker (Talk) 11:29, 15 January 2016 (UTC)
The referencing on its destruction is/was perfect. It is merely that I was searching for potential hooks to celebrate Wikipedia's 15th Birthday and felt that would be ideal, however mentioning its destruction put a damper on the theme. The Birthday has since passed, so any closing reviewer can select whichever hook they prefer (in full). Just a side-note (and I have fixed this in the aritcle), the 70-foot column was rounded and converted from 20 m, so don't convert backwards and end up with 21 m! Jolly Ω Janner 21:13, 15 January 2016 (UTC)
Aaah, I see. I thought that it was destroyed so soon after was an amusing part of the hook, personally, but them humour is subjective, after all, and I can see what you mean if you were looking for a birthday-specific hook. I've reverted your size change, though — while the first source says "ca. 20m", but the second source says Template:Tq. I had originally put exactly what you changed it to, but then amended it to be 70-foot once I found the second source. Good spot, though; it's nice to know people actually check the references properly! — OwenBlacker (Talk) 09:39, 21 January 2016 (UTC)
That's quite alright. My final recommendation would therefore be to add a conversion in metres to the hook, as some of our readers will be unfamiliar with feet as a measurement, especially since the article is now in Germany. All the hooks are great, but I have a slight liking to ALT2. I will leave them all unstruck and up to the promoter to chose. Jolly Ω Janner 09:45, 21 January 2016 (UTC)
I've added that conversion, as you recommend, plus I've added an ALT4, now that I've found a reference for it. — OwenBlacker (Talk) 19:50, 23 January 2016 (UTC)
Template:Ping It just occurs to me; could I ask you repeat the {{DYK checklist}} review please, so it's clear that all issues have been resolved (assuming you're happy with everything, of course). Thank you so much for helping me get there! — OwenBlacker (Talk) 19:58, 23 January 2016 (UTC)
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